she found winter

she found winter
when the leaves
sat
on her shoulder

 

 

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6 Responses to she found winter

  1. NMY says:

    This is interesting and another deep piece. Winter setting on her with Fall shedding on her. With the leaves here used as a figurative device to symbolize Autumn, it’s rather interesting that fall brought about her winter. The layers we shed in the presence of those we love…if not clothed back with their layers, leaves us feeling doubtful and cold, which I’m supposing is Winter in this piece. Correct me if I’m wrong, please.

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  2. daisymae2017 says:

    Nice poem. Nothing wrong with poem just that it leaves me wanting more.

    Liked by 1 person

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