I looked at the Temple

I looked at the Temple
of her eyes

she made
her religion
in me

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9 Responses to I looked at the Temple

  1. Lia says:

    Oh… to be loved like this…
    So beautifully structured David…

    …”and so her religion found a home in god…”

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  2. Lia says:

    Apologies for the comment that upon re-reading doesn’t seem to say what it really wanted to say, which was simply, that this feels like really a deep poem… could have various possible positive or negative meanings… and it’s truly lovely; beautifully made. Happy new year David, to both you and your “she,” and to your family. May it be a joyful and peaceful one πŸ™πŸ”†πŸŽ‰πŸ’›

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    • David says:

      Your comments are lovely, and appreciated, Lia. I’m a bit like you in sometimes I need time away from WordPress, and poems, we just do it a little differently. πŸ™‚

      I think love we have for a partner is like a religion, we can make a shrine of them, ah. πŸ™‚

      Blessings for the new year, Lia. πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™

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      • Lia says:

        Ah, thank you David… and yes, beautifully said, about the love we have for a partner/helper…

        …and sometimes it’s good to stand back a bit at times, and view both ourselves, and the shrine we’ve made of someone/something else, more objectively, amiright dear poet-friend?… :))

        I love your poetry. Blessings to you also. Very sincerely thanking thee. :)) πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

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      • David says:

        We fill our heart with them, and hope they understand us. πŸ™‚

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      • Lia says:

        πŸ™‚πŸ’—

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