I looked at the Temple

I looked at the Temple
of her eyes

she made
her religion
in me

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9 Responses to I looked at the Temple

  1. Lia says:

    Oh… to be loved like this…
    So beautifully structured David…

    …”and so her religion found a home in god…”

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  2. Lia says:

    Apologies for the comment that upon re-reading doesn’t seem to say what it really wanted to say, which was simply, that this feels like really a deep poem… could have various possible positive or negative meanings… and it’s truly lovely; beautifully made. Happy new year David, to both you and your “she,” and to your family. May it be a joyful and peaceful one 🙏🔆🎉💛


    • David says:

      Your comments are lovely, and appreciated, Lia. I’m a bit like you in sometimes I need time away from WordPress, and poems, we just do it a little differently. 🙂

      I think love we have for a partner is like a religion, we can make a shrine of them, ah. 🙂

      Blessings for the new year, Lia. 💙💙💙

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